Read the article by Steve Mulligan on critiques:
1. What are some of the problems encountered by photographers using the "recurring pattern motif?"
2. How do the U-shaped ropes add to the image of the crates?
3. What does and does not work about having the extra crates on the right side?
4. What two changes does Mulligan suggest for the "Hillside, Puerto Rico" photograph to strengthen it?
5. In the "Street" photograph, what is included in the image to break up its overall monotony? What should be removed?
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1. the danger of crossing into complete abstraction, also very difficult to employ this method and keep the image interesting
ReplyDelete2. the juxtaposition of dark and lights in the ropes make it intriguing
3. it distracts from this composition, breaking up the facade of the other crates, its good as for giving it some depth and breaking up the the flat plane of the image
4. a. a repeating highlight can enhance the composition
b. by printing the photo down slightly and by applying a very weak solution of potassium ferricynide to the dominant large leaves
5. The circle combined with the foreground bricks running at cross-angles to the upper ones
and they could removethis square cover of some sort in the left corner and he finds it to be distracting
marrissa j.
1. danger of crossing into complete abstraction. difficult to employ this method and keep image interesting.
ReplyDelete2. the dark and light rope lines make the picture more interesting, the severe lines are complimented by the U-shaped ropes.
3. gives some depth to scene, showing top of of the bottom box detracts from this composition.
4. cropping and printing changes.
5. circle combined with the foreground bricks running at cross-angles to the upper ones, breaks up the monotony. remove the destracting square from image.
-katlyn S.
1.keeping the photo from turning into an abstract and keeping it intresting..
ReplyDelete2.the rope breaks the horizontal and vertical lines and it mske the picture more complex and intrusting.
3.the extra crates give depth but it destracts you from the tones in the ropes.
4.cropping out the destracting branch and givig highlights to the pic when developing.
5.the utility cover breaks the monotony lines but the square in the upper corner should be removed because it is distracting.
Tyler B.
1. This type of pattern has the potential to become very abstract and the tendency to be very dull.
ReplyDelete2. It breaks op the harsh straight lines of the wood crates and adds contrast because the ropes are very light against the dark crates.
3. The extra crates break up the sameness more by adding a space between the other crates and adding depth. It breaks up the trick of the wall of crates and it’s very bright so it distracts from the highlight of the ropes.
4. It is suggested that he crop out of the branch hanging on the right side for it distracts, and Steve also suggests that the picture maybe be bleached a little to increase contrast.
5. The small circular water pipe and the sideways bricks of the sidewalk break up the roads straight lines. The square grate in the corner should be removed because it distracts the eye from the rest of the picture.
-Brock Z.
1.photographers encounter the crossing into complete abstract and its difficulty to keep the image interesting.
ReplyDelete2.the different colored ropes compiment all the severe lines of the image
3. it gives the picture some depth but at the same time it does distract a little with the showing of the top of the box.
4.that he should try printing it on some other type of paper. He would like to them on a warmer paper
5.the circle at the left bottom corner breaks up its overall montony and the square on the top left corner should be removed.
Daisy C.
1.photographers encounter the crossing into complete abstract and its difficulty to keep the image interesting.
ReplyDelete2.the different colored ropes compiment all the severe lines of the image
3. it gives the picture depth but it distracts a little with showing the top of the box.
4. cropping and printing changes.
5. circle with the bricks running at cross angles to the upper ones, breaks up the monotony. remove the destracting square from image.
-sarah l.
1.the danger of crossing into complete abstract and it can be difficult to keep the imagae very interesting.
ReplyDelete2.the different color ropes show all the lines in the image.
3.it shows depth but distracts you from the differrent tones.
4.printing on different types of paper and cropping images.
5.the circle with the brick breaks up the monotony the square in the top corner should be removed, its very distracting.
-Brooke L
1.photographers encounter the crossing into complete abstract and its difficulty to keep the image interesting.
ReplyDelete2.the dark and light rope lines make the picture more interesting.
3.creates give depth but distracts from diff. tones.
4.printing and cropping differently.
5.the circle at the left bottom corner breaks up its overall montony
the square on the top left corner should be removed
M.Ficklen
1.photographers encounter the crossing into complete abstract and its difficulty to keep the image interesting.
ReplyDelete2.the different colored ropes compiment all the severe lines of the image
3. it gives the picture some depth but at the same time it does distract a little with the showing of the top of the box.
4.that he should try printing it on some other type of paper. He would like to them on a warmer paper
5.the circle at the left bottom corner breaks up its overall montony and the square on the top left corner should be removed
Hunter Graff
1. the danger of crossing into complete abstraction, also very difficult to employ this method and keep the image interesting
ReplyDelete2. the juxtaposition of dark and lights in the ropes make it intriguing
3. it distracts from this composition, breaking up the facade of the other crates, its good as for giving it some depth and breaking up the the flat plane of the image
4. a. a repeating highlight can enhance the composition
b. by printing the photo down slightly and by applying a very weak solution of potassium ferricynide to the dominant large leaves
5. The circle combined with the foreground bricks running at cross-angles to the upper ones
and they could removethis square cover of some sort in the left corner and he finds it to be distracting
Morgan Brewner
1. the danger of crossing into complete abstraction is also very difficult to emply this method and keep the image interesting
ReplyDelete2. the position of dark and lights in the ropes make it intriguing
3. it distracts from the composition. its good for giving it depth and breaking up the the flat plane of the image
4. a. a repeating highlight can enhance the composition
b. by printing the photo slightly
5. The circle combined with the foreground bricks running at cross-angles to the upper ones.
Kimberly H.
1. The danger of this is that it makes the photo more dull and not as interesting.
ReplyDelete2. It adds more detail to make it look alot more appealing.
3. it distracts you from the main composition of the photo, and gives it alot of depth.
4. A repeating highlight to enhance the composition.
5. The circle that is combined with the foreground bricks run at cross angles to the upper ones. and they could remove the side things that distract from the main composition.
Lindsay J.
1. You need to keep the phot interesting.
ReplyDelete2.it makes the photo more appealing by adding details.
3. it adds depth and distracts you from the main composition.
4. repeating highlights
5. they run at cross angles to the upper ones.
ryan f.
1.the danger of crossing into complete abstract and it can be difficult to keep the imagae very interesting.
ReplyDelete2.the different color ropes show all the lines in the image.
3.it shows depth but distracts you from the differrent tones.
4.printing on different types of paper and cropping images.
5.the circle with the brick breaks up the monotony the square in the top corner should be removed, its very distracting.
Victoria Drpaer!!!